Sugar pt2

I think he [Jay, you could tease this out by adding more information/specificity] gave up on baseball too quick because everyone has a bad couple of games he should've never gave up [run-on sentence] and started over though. That part made me upset because pitching is his talent and he threw it away just because a few bad pitching games. Im glad he found a new life though and made his mom a table and found his friend.