The Breakfast Club. Alethia Moore

The breakfast club has nothing to do with breakfast!! A very diverse popularity groups found themselves together during a Saturday detention. Throughout the movie the moods of all the characters changed drastically! They went from hating eachother [each other or one another? Either way, two words]  to feeling a sort of sympathy [sympathy or empathy] for eachother after understand their circumstances. This movie described a group of kids of different backgrounds coming together and sharing a one purpose or theme [what is a theme and how is "punishment" the theme?] which was punishment. One thing that I didn't like while watching this movie is how it ended without seeing the way they would act towards eachother in school the next day. I felt that this was important because the whole concept of the movie was to see how all these different world would collide. I felt that the movie lacked this important factors of the overall outcome in the movie.

Alethia,

I have given you credit for this post in powerschool; however, I hope you will consider this simply pre-writing and collecting. I don't think you will want your grade to remain as is. This post is rather haphazard and slapdash. It does not reach the minimum length requirement, it contains many typographical errors, and the depth of analysis is lacking. In other words, you can do better Alethia.

Monahan