Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Rocky- M.joyner

During the film Rocky it shows that an opportunity can come and go, if you don't take it then you will regret not taking it cause you might no like what or where you live [run-on; consider breaking up]. Plus with Rocky he had the chance but he kinda [too casual] let all his neighbors go to head and how they all treat him nice and all different. During the fight with Apollo I he ???? was stressed out from everyone going up to him asking him for money

Max,

I am confused by this post. It neither demonstrates your understanding or opinions on the film. If you want to do a character analysis that is permissible, but let your audience know how the character(s) develop over the course of the film.

MM

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